Nice level! I really like the design and everything. I hope your series goes well. Great job!

Rate: 10/10

It feels like you've made exactly the same mistakes as you did in World 1-1 of your previous series. Sure, this level has more scenery, but it still makes similar mistakes, the main one being that the challenges are far too widely spaced out, making most of the level quite boring. There should nearly always be action and just because it's the first level doesn't mean you have to make it boring and uninventive. For example, getting the coins at x3000 y240 is so tedious I wouldn't even bother, as there are no enemies to make it interesting. And the challenges weren't very creative; sprite were used in their average ways and nothing more. If I were you, I'd actually focus on spacing out challenges less and designing more inventive challenges before focusing on complex backtrack. If the challenges themselves aren't fun, complex backtrack falls flat. That's not to say it was all bad- the level did have simple but pleasant tiling. But give each individual challenge more thought.

7/10

Great Level 10/10
-Softendo SMF1 Level Creator and Game Maker

My last rate in PG.

To start of SMWDX, it is quite a level to play. In the first half of the level, it was great, and open vast areas to explore have too little to limit what you want to do. MagicOTD is correct with how the scenery is decent, but you need to fill in all those empty spots where there are none. I would like to see scenery in the other half of the level, but other than that, it was phenomenal. I like how you can get from water to ground again and again with slightest of obstacles really fun to play. Be careful with blind jumps at x5680, and be considerate with the coin placement.

9/10 - War Machine, Level Critic

The first half needs more scenery and felt empty agreeing with MagicOTD. Other than that, nice level LB. Make sure your story doesn't include Mario rescuing peach from bowser please. First review in a long time:)
Conqueror of the Galaxies aproved! Score=9.5/10

I have nothing to say...

Awesome level for starting your new series! No flaws found! :D

My rate: 10/10

Perfect - this has some koopas walking on layer 2s in airships. But that's the only flaw. 9.8/10

Legit level design.

It's again, awesome, but now too big level. This level have minor airship flaws, but it's OK. At 5140XC 240Y is a water cutoff (where are water placed in both layers) and at 5180X 160Y used water in L2. Don't use water in L2 (-0.5). Scenery is decent and wonderful, but you need it more in empty areas (-0.5). Nice, but too big level. It's more difficult beat levels with both X-axis and Y-axis (only X-axis levels are easier to complete), but it's possible.

Overall score 9/10